User:Kiydal/Workplace safety in healthcare settings/Kiydal Peer Review

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Cstoviak
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This article contains a host of problems. First off the title does not describe what the article is actually about. The article is primarily about violence in the healthcare setting, not safety overall. The lead does make reference to non-violence related safety hazards, but these ideas are extremely undeveloped and do a very poor job of highlighting the risks specific to the healthcare field. For example, it does not make any reference to biohazards which are a key, industry-specific safety hazard in the healthcare field. Instead it pinpoints slip and fall injuries which is not unique to healthcare at all. The first subsection uses excessive space on describing the meaning of the word aggression. There are grammatical errors. The writing quality overall is poor.