User:Kjb1818/Deafness in the Dominican Republic/Kaj307 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kjb1818


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kjb1818/Deafness in the Dominican Republic


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the content is good. I think the Deaf Empowerment section could use some expanding if there's any more information you could add about the organizations already listed.

I noticed that some of the citations appear in the middle of words or sentences, which impedes the flow of reading the article.

The formatting could also be tweaked a bit to make each section more distinct and separate from the last.

It seems like in a few instances, the same reference has been cited multiple times so that it appears in the references section as distinct sources (for example, numbers 3-5; 7-10; 12-14).

The article could benefit from a quick run-down for minor language/grammar/punctuation edits, but other than that, it's good information!