User:Kjk114211/Uncertainty reduction theory/Sdb079 Peer Review

General info
KarsonKester
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kjk114211/Uncertainty reduction theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Uncertainty reduction theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
The clarity of information added was done well. Grammar appears to need fixes, such as in:  For example, if one goes up to the person of said uncertainty and asking them directly  . This part does not read correctly, but I understand what is being said.

Additional citations that were added are from credible sources. A lot of information was added to the main text of the article and these additions go more in depth to the theory overall.