User:Kjoi2000/Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic/Asherm4802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Kjoi2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kjoi2000/Mental_health_during_the_COVID-19_pandemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the bullet points added to help health care workers are defiantly                              important and are a good contribution. Are you planning on keeping everything in bullet point format? I think it is a good idea, but I would suggest making sure the heading that explains what the bullet points are about is bolded and easy to understand. Overall the information in the article is easy to understand and well balanced, the only other suggestion I have would be to check grammatical and spelling errors. Great article and information!