User:Kjoi2000/Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic/Nikkigb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kjoi2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kjoi2000/Mental_health_during_the_COVID-19_pandemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic

Lead

 * The lead was very concise but got to the point and explained what the article was about clearly. The only thing I would add is maybe a summary of all of the sections of the article discusses.

Content

 * The content was up to date and informative on relevant topics. One suggestion I have is that adding content on topics that are underrepresented in the article instead, like impact on individuals with anxiety disorders.

Tone and Balance

 * The content added for the most part is neutral. However I would change the wording of the sentence that says "Managing one's mental health is as important as managing physical health." This sentence kind of gives the impression that it is an impression.
 * As I mentioned before there are some underrepresented topics and I think adding more content on those topics will create a better balance.

Sources and References

 * Many of the sources are up to date and the content reflects the sources. There are some statements that are not cited though. For example, "Know how to link people affected with COVID-19 with available resources." would hold more weight if a source was cited to back up on how and why that is beneficial. There's a few more statements like that need to be cited such as "Keep all staff protected from poor mental health. Focus on long-term occupational capacity rather than short term results."

Organization

 * The organization overall is great. The only confusion I had was why some of the points were bolded, and some were not.

Overall Impressions

 * I think you added some valuable information regarding ways that healthcare workers, and team leaders in health facilities can cope with negative impacts of the pandemic on mental health, However I think it would be beneficial to add some more content on other topics. Much of the article focuses on how the mental health of healthcare workers were impacted but in order to get a balanced a full picture of the impacts of covid-19 on mental health content on other topics presented in the article.