User:Kjtysonl/Misogyny in rap music/Pbhartje Peer Review

General info
Kjtysonl
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Misogyny in rap music - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Misogyny in rap music - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I have reviewed the change made by my peer and I support the improved wording added to the article while keeping it unbiased. I did not see too many edits to the article or examples in the sandbox for additional review. Suggestions for improvement would be to look for ways to provide the information in an unbiased way as the article is flagged and could lead to people not reading farther. Look for additional articles to utilize as sources for both sides while finding factual information to share between them. Maybe look toward legal data to support statements marked for being one sided or biased.