User:KkSlides/Erythrose 4-phosphate/Mayuyunnaise Peer Review

General info
KkSlides
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:KkSlides/Erythrose 4-phosphate
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Erythrose 4-phosphate

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that is added is a good and relevant content, however, the focus of the content could be improved:

- Draw the focus more to the main topic, Erythrose 4-phosphate, instead to the enzymes involved in the reaction mentioned.

- The second sentence "This reaction is a part of the non-oxidative phase of the pentose phosphate pathway." need citation.