User:Kkies135/Pontchartrain Park/Takia02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kkies135


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kkies135/Pontchartrain Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm not for sure if the paragraph provided is the leading section but here are some suggestions:


 * Cite references as you write the article
 * Keep in mind of organization-- the lead section should contain points about the article's major sections
 * If possible add images that apply with Wikipedia's copyright guidelines with captions
 * Link other articles such as neighborhoods etc