User:Kkiing08/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.)Talk:Nigerian Civil War

Talk:Autoclave

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I’m a Nigerian. It’s important for me to learn about my birthplace.\

Autoclave: Off all times I've been in the Micro/ chem labs, I've never really understood the process or importance of autoclave, except that it's used for sterilizing the equipments we use in lab. I wanted to look more into it and further expand my understanding for it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

After reading the article, I thought the contents included and discussed were beneficial and well written in some aspects. They are some grammatical errors here and there but I'm not sure how I could have made the article grammatically better in the sense of an "amazing science article". I added a section to the talk page and will paste what inputted below:

While reading through the article, I came across the section called "Air Removal" and started to wonder why air must be removed from the chamber before an autoclave can begin performing it's function. I was a little disappointed as the section does not explain why air must be removed from the chamber. Upon further research as to why this may be a necessity, I found that in order for the item to be completely sterile for use or discarding, the steam that's used to sterilize in the autoclave must come into full contact with what needs to be sterilized. Since air disrupts the steam circulation (which you did well by including in your article), the item would not be completely sterilized and thus diminishes the process of sterilization. Perhaps adding the importance of the removal of air in an autoclave would be very beneficial in this article.

The organization in the article was well oriented and the images complimented the sections in regards to what was being discussed.