User:Kkio77/Intersex (biology)/Jand1990 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kkio77


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kkio77/Intersex_%28biology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Intersex (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the paragraph added beneath the description of intersex. I strongly encourage you to add more information to the existing categories: mammals, nematodes, fishes, and crustaceans. They lack in explanation and examples. The sections included are also fairly brief, therefore you could create others that are more in detail, which will further organize your information.