User:Klb123456/Race and health/Elli207 Peer Review

General info
Klb123456
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Klb123456/Race and health - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Race and health - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Leade: is alright

Content: is a little short but is neutral and fits into the article and it looks up to date

Tone: the tone is neutral

Citation: You need to do the proper in text citations and also add them properly to the bibliography at the end. Make sure the sources you used are in an Alphabetic order.

Organization: Your last addition does not really has a connection to the overall text and the other additions are a little short and have to get a better connection to the text.

Overall Impression: The additions seem good and important but they are a little short and have to get better included in the text. And when you fix the citation the reader can better follow where your thoughts are coming from and the text seems more trustable.