User:Kleabwr/Indo-European migrations/Lsolares Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kleabwr)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kleabwr/Indo-European_migrations?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indo-European migrations

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)