User:Kleaslemon/Maba Man/Jmedi091 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kleaslemon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kleaslemon/Maba_Man?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maba Man

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The first sentence of the Characteristics section (of preexisting article) can be blended into the lead section. In addition, you should update the lead section to refer to the new section of Technology.

The Technology section adds new information correlating to the topic and enhances the overall article.