User:Kleaslemon/Maba Man/Rrami052 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kleaslemon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kleaslemon/Maba Man


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maba Man

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article seems as if minimal research may have been done

Suggestions:


 * 1) If pictures for that strata identification exist maybe add for reference.
 * 2) Your starting point is good, but more detailed about Maba man's history could be added such as relations to homo erectus (like comparing the two)
 * 3) for the second paragraph make sure you use the reference you have.
 * 4) If you've found resources, maybe update the references from the bibliography