User:Klharrell/sandbox

Article Evaluation At the top of the article, there is a heading that states that the article includes a list of references, but the sources are unclear. The main reason behind this is stated that there are not enough inline citations. The first paragraph of the article felt hectic. It was as if the whole thing was one run on sentence. The second paragraph seems persuasive in nature. The citations that are present do work, but there is a lack of them. This article is part of 4 current Wikipedia projects. The talk page is very active.