User:Klindeman1/Gender equality

In this article it states that Gender equality is also known as sexual equality or equality of the sexes. It also states that gender equality is the goal and what we strive for. According to The United Populations Fund on Gender equality it says that reaching gender equality means we have equality overall. According to the document gender equality is also connected to women's rights. This is connected to women's rights because in order for gender equality to be obtained men and women need to be treated equally. Gender equality is also connected to sex trafficking, femicide and more. It also states that women are still more likely to be poor and illiterate compared to men.

Shakers is a term used for describing a group that practiced celibacy and segregation of the sexes. They came from the North-West branch Quaker community. The Shakers were the first most gender equal organization. This organization stayed gender equal for 200 years.

Since World War Two the women's liberation act was in action. The United States has since made different conventions that help to improve equal rights. There are many different conventions across the country. Since this time men are being seen working more jobs that are considered “for women” and more women are working jobs that were described as a “man's job”. It has also been affected by men taking more of a role towards taking care of children. For women it is also more accepted now that they return to work after giving birth and do not stay home just to take care of the children.

The European Union has not been letting women go into society as much as men are able to. There are a lot of laws that have come up based on gender neutral, international courts and more.

There have been many different motives that have been at play for years. In 2010 The European Union opened up the European Institute of Gender Equality.to promote gender equality and fight against sexual discrimination. Gender equality also affects people's health in many different ways. There is also a effect on violence because of sexual discrimination. More violence has been happening and will continue if gender equality is not reached.

In the article there are many spelling errors and confusing language. The language makes it hard for a reader to understand anything at times. The spelling errors are spread out and most common in words like “effect”. There are also grammatically incorrect sentences that say “they is” and so on. The whole document is overwhelming and confusing to readers. The article speaks about many different aspects of gender equality and is unorganized.

The question at hand is will gender equality ever really happen? There are so many factors and people that go into making gender equality actually happen. Even if half the country is able to reach gender equality the other half still has not which will make it unbalanced. It takes the whole country and whole world to make it happen. So how many years will it take to reach gender equality? That question is hard to answer as it has taken us so long to reach the point we are at right now and even that is not enough and women are still being discriminated against.

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In this article it states that Gender equality is also known as sexual equality or equality of the sexes. It also states that gender equality is the goal and what we strive for. According to The United Populations Fund on Gender equality it says that reaching gender equality means we have equality overall. According to the document gender equality is also connected to women's rights. This is connected to women's rights because in order for gender equality to be obtained men and women need to be treated equally. Gender equality is also connected to sex trafficking, femicide and more. It also states that women are still more likely to be poor and illiterate compared to men.

Shakers is a term used for describing a group that practiced celibacy and segregation of the sexes. They came from the North-West branch Quaker community. The Shakers were the first most gender equal organization. This organization stayed gender equal for 200 years.

Since World War Two the women's liberation act was in action. The United States has since made different conventions that help to improve equal rights. There are many different conventions across the country. Since this time men are being seen working more jobs that are considered “for women” and more women are working jobs that were described as a “man's job”. It has also been affected by men taking more of a role towards taking care of children. For women it is also more accepted now that they return to work after giving birth and do not stay home just to take care of the children.

The European Union has not been letting women go into society as much as men are able to. There are a lot of laws that have come up based on gender neutral, international courts and more.

There have been many different motives that have been at play for years. In 2010 The European Union opened up the European Institute of Gender Equality.to promote gender equality and fight against sexual discrimination. Gender equality also affects people's health in many different ways. There is also a effect on violence because of sexual discrimination. More violence has been happening and will continue if gender equality is not reached.

In the article there are many spelling errors and confusing language. The language makes it hard for a reader to understand anything at times. The spelling errors are spread out and most common in words like “effect”. There are also grammatically incorrect sentences that say “they is” and so on. The whole document is overwhelming and confusing to readers. The article speaks about many different aspects of gender equality and is unorganized.

The question at hand is will gender equality ever really happen? There are so many factors and people that go into making gender equality actually happen. Even if half the country is able to reach gender equality the other half still has not which will make it unbalanced. It takes the whole country and whole world to make it happen. So how many years will it take to reach gender equality? That question is hard to answer as it has taken us so long to reach the point we are at right now and even that is not enough and women are still being discriminated against.