User:Klm01011/Thiomargarita namibiensis/Eesakguee Peer Review

Introduction
Great introduction! It incorporates all the topics that will be further mentioned in the article as well with new information that corresponds to the present information in the original article. One thing I would begin doing is flooding the information with hyperlinks that directs certain words with sub-articles on Wikipedia e.g. mesophile and neutrophilic.

Discovery
The information added is relevant to the information, but there are ideas that could be combined to grasp an entire picture. And I understand this is a draft, but some ideas to consider is. Below is a edited copy of a portion of your article that I am suggesting:

In 1997, Heide N. Schulz and her colleagues from the Max Plank Institude for Marine Microbiology discovered Thiomargarita namibiensis in the costal sediments of the Namibian coast.

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