User:Klm01011/Thiomargarita namibiensis/Hannah Yousuf Peer Review

General info
Klm01011
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Klm01011/Thiomargarita namibiensis
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Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lead. However, more updated information could be included and resources of form other articles that can back up the background information that you are including. Lastly, create a sentence or two that can summarize your entire article in whole. Fro example, not entirely like an abstract, but it can give readers a slight understand of the various topics that you are discussing regarding thiomargarita. So far, it is a fair start. The content overall is consistent and very organize. I can see the direction of your overall article. However, it's suggested to continue adding sources to the information that you are using and continue to add additional information to a few of your section. There is a section where the sentence and/or the idea is not fully elaborated in its entirety. The tone is pretty standard. There is a few vocabulary words that are used in class. However, there is slight grammar and sentence structure errors. There is no images yet, as you continue to add information, make sure to add images to the sections that are needed. For example, add an image for the structure and, if possible, and an image of the metabolic process that it follows. Overall, it is a good start. The foundation of the article is clear and consistent. I can see your overall direction, which is great.