User:Klrgmclass/Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders/Lucialava Peer Review

General info
Klrgmclass, NiranunP, Klw128
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Klrgmclass/Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I thought your draft was really strong! I would recommend expanding a little on the role of the medical industrial complex and medical training in your section on overdiagnosis. Having done the research it is easy to understand how doctors are trained to prioritize profit over care, but that's not super easy for people unfamiliar with the topic to understand. Otherwise I thought it was really good.