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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Article Evaluation
Overall, this article has more substance than the other options listed below. The lead sentence is good, and the sections are appropriate. Despite having a 'Diagnosis' section, there is no information listed there. There are some grammatical and punctuation mistakes in the body of the text, but the overall tone is appropriate and non-biased. There could be more information on treatment (superficial keratectomy is also a treatment). There is an appropriate amount of media and images. Looking at some potential sources, there are very recent reviews (2021) that likely have additional, newly-discovered information and can be used to expand the article. Taking a glance at the Talk page, it looks like it has not been updated since 2009!

The Spanish version of the page is overall consistent with the English version. It also lacks a 'diagnosis' section, so there is some potential for improvement there. The tone and content are appropriate. There is no discussion happening on the Talk (discusión) page.


 * Sources:
 * https://eyewiki.aao.org/Macular_Corneal_Dystrophy
 * Gulias-Cañizo, R., Castañeda-Díez, R., Gómez-Leal, A., Klintworth, G. K., & Rodríguez-Reyes, A. A. (2006). Distrofia macular corneal: características clínicas, histopatológicas y ultraestructurales. Archivos de la Sociedad Española de Oftalmología, 81(6), 315-320.
 * Singh, S., Das, S., Kannabiran, C., Jakati, S., & Chaurasia, S. (2021). Macular corneal dystrophy: an updated review. Current Eye Research, 46(6), 765-770.
 * Singh, S., Das, S., Kannabiran, C., Jakati, S., & Chaurasia, S. (2021). Macular corneal dystrophy: an updated review. Current Eye Research, 46(6), 765-770.

Option 2: Alenquer Phlebovirus

 * Article Evaluation

The article itself is very short, only a few paragraphs. It has a good lead sentence, although due to the article being so short, there is not a lot of information to expand upon. Doing some source research (below), it looks like there is new information discovered about the virus; the most recent source on the page currently was published in 2009, whereas there is new research as of 2011. There are no media or images. The talk page is completely blank (no discussions happening).

This page is also missing a Spanish version. There are some sources that are in Spanish. This virus is primarily found in Brazil and South America, so the addition of a Spanish page would be helpful.


 * Sources:
 * Cruz Malpica, C. D. S. (2001). Estandarización de la prueba de ensayo inmunoenzimático para la detección de anticuerpos IgG en sueros de humanos para el virus Phlebotomus fever.
 * Palacios, G., Tesh, R., Travassos da Rosa, A., Savji, N., Sze, W., Jain, K., ... & Lipkin, W. I. (2011). Characterization of the Candiru antigenic complex (Bunyaviridae: Phlebovirus), a highly diverse and reassorting group of viruses affecting humans in tropical America. Journal of virology, 85(8), 3811-3820.
 * ROSA, Amélia Paes de Andrade Travassos da et al. Characterization of eight new phlebotomus fever serogroup arboviruses (Bunyaviridae : Phlebovirus) from the Amazon region of Brazil. American Journal of Tropical Medicine and Hygiene, v. 32, n. 5, p. 1164-1171, 1983.
 * ROSA, Amélia Paes de Andrade Travassos da et al. Characterization of eight new phlebotomus fever serogroup arboviruses (Bunyaviridae : Phlebovirus) from the Amazon region of Brazil. American Journal of Tropical Medicine and Hygiene, v. 32, n. 5, p. 1164-1171, 1983.

Article Evaluation
The English article is very short, only a paragraph. It provides a good overview but lacks detail. The most recent sourced date is 2007; a quick source search reveals that there are several new articles published that make references to Warthin-Finkeldey cells, including their presence in more diseases (i.e., specific Lymphoma subtypes). There is no picture or media, which would be particularly beneficial for this type of article (a cell subtype that is identified by its distinctive appearance). The Talk page for this article is a single comment from 2009, stating that an 'image would be nice'. I'd have to agree.

The Spanish version of the article has more details, including a history of the discovery and name. It does not have any associated image or media. The only comment on the Talk page (Discusión) is from the Internet Archive Bot.


 * Sources:
 * Aladily, T., & Bustami, N. (2021). Follicular Lymphoma Rich in Warthin-Finkeldey Cells. Sultan Qaboos University Medical Journal, 21(4), 668-669.
 * Lapadat, R., Nam, M. W., Mehrotra, S., Velankar, M., & Pambuccian, S. E. (2017). Mulberry cells in the thyroid: warthin–finkeldey‐like cells in hashimoto thyroiditis‐associated lymphoma. Diagnostic Cytopathology, 45(3), 212-216.
 * Kothari, K., Agnihotri, M., Rojekar, A., Waghmare, T., & Kolhe, A. (2021). Warthin‐Finkeldey giant cells—A useful clue for the cytodiagnosis of Kimura disease: A report of three cases. Diagnostic Cytopathology, 49(4), E164-E166.