User:Kmack1075/Marketing communications/MizuAzul Peer Review

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Kmack1075


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 * Marketing communications

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This article is article needs a lot of work! To keep it manageable for our class assignment, I would recommend focusing on the lead paragraph.

Split the first sentence into two sentences. Initial sentence should be the definition. Second sentence should highlight other names/acronyms for Marketing communications.

Citation #1 is incomplete for finding the source. Either identify and add the correct source or find a new source to support the initial lead sentences. Ideally 2-3 new sources could be found to better support the specific claims in the first lead paragraph.