User:Kmart0915/Food safety/Bibaschh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kmart0915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmart0915/Food_safety?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Food safety

Evaluate the drafted changes
All 3 links work but the sources are not reliable because they're all .com. The sources are current and reflects the content added. The content added could be more well-organized. There are few grammatical errors and some sentences can be improved. The content added strengthen the details about physical food contamination. The content added can be improved using reliable sources.