User:Kmart0915/Food safety/Subi6197 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kmart0915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmart0915/Food_safety?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmart0915/Food_safety?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Very good theme, language is also kept neutral. My suggestion is to consider putting together sentences that refer to the same reference? This will be more visually pleasing. Nice Job!