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Parker's Back Notes


 * 1) Plot Summary
 * 2) Storyline is slightly out of order
 * 3) Parker fell into bad crowd after he got his tats
 * 4) Poorly integrated quote as paragraph 6
 * 5) Paragraph 8 is missing components
 * 6) Parker's boss comes to collect money for her tractor
 * 7) There's analysis in plot summary. Why is there analysis in the plot summary?
 * 8) Paragraph 2- Protestant mother or not?
 * 9) Inaccuracies
 * 10) Doesn't want to spite her, wishes to get her to accept him (Paragraph 5)
 * 11) Sources
 * 12) Source 8 is unresponsive
 * 13) Look more into source 4. Not seeing the point, mostly opinion-based
 * 14) Source 2 is unresponsive. Possibly a copy of source 4
 * 15) Source 5 does not lead to any article, article is difficult to find on main page, source is notes on a fucking picture. Only relation to story is the use of word Bynzantine
 * 16) Opening
 * 17) Last paragraph is highly opinion based
 * 18) Literary Technique
 * 19) Highly opinion based

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