User:Kmcmiche/Antidepressant discontinuation syndrome/Jalyn547 Peer Review

Peer Review

General info
Kmcmiche
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AKmcmiche%2FAntidepressant_discontinuation_syndrome&diff=1208247739&oldid=1203557137
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Antidepressant discontinuation syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see the changes you've made, or would like to change. Can I ask why you would like to delete such a large portion of the article that's already there? I also think it might be better, for the flow of the paper if you could move the Culture/History section up to the top after the introduction of the article. I think the article would flow better if the history is given before the signs and symptoms. According to the wiki guidelines, an article should have a good lead. A good lead introduces the topic and briefly describes the contents within the article. I think some of the info in the beginning of the article could be moved to a different section or completely deleted. For example the sentence, "The symptoms may include flu-like symptoms, trouble sleeping, nausea, poor balance, sensory changes, akathisia, intrusive thoughts, depersonalization and derealization, mania, anxiety, and depression," seems to be a bit redundant because there is a section for symptoms. I would focus on structuring the lead to give a basic overview of the article; what it is and what will be discussed in the article.