User:Kmdar0117/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Apollo (ballet)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am a dance minor at the University of Houston. Therefore, ballet is a very interesting subject for me.

Evaluate the article

 * The lead section of this article provides a clear overview of the information presented. It is slightly overdetailed and provides information that could be covered in the body portion of the article.
 * The content of the article is clear and relevant to the topic.
 * However the tone and organization of the article needs improvement. It is currently only divided into two sections ("Music" and "Ballet). The reader is already aware that this article is about ballet. Therefore a more detailed subtitle is required. Along with this, there needs to be more subtitles to cover more specific topics.
 * The article is well sourced and the references are documented appropriately.
 * There are two strong images that help the audience have a better understanding of the article.
 * I feel as if the article is off to a good start, but is just lacking in details within the body portions of the writing. The intro takes some of that detailed information away from the body paragraphs and needs to be relocated.