User:Kmeehan0214/Inflammatory cytokine/Echall.su Peer Review

General info
kmeehan0214
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmeehan0214/Inflammatory_cytokine?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Inflammatory cytokine:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

From what I reviewed so far, I feel that the draft is on the right track. I feel that what has been added is relevant and neutral content that deepens the understanding of the topic. I think what was added to the section that addresses function was well said. The information added was also relevant and neutral. If I could offer any suggestion it would be to keep it as concise as possible. Try to get rid of some unnecessary words to clear up the content as much as possible. Overall, I think so far this was very well done.