User:Kmerren/Hooded seal/Saraknowsthings Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

kmerren


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmerren/Hooded_seal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hooded seal

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you're additions to the article are great, informative, and well written. You're missing a comma in your second sentence, and could also maybe reword that second sentence to make it less wordy. Also, unique uses a, not an. I actually couldn't access the sources, but they look like peer-reviewed journals. Great overall job!