User:Kmj2016/History of anorexia nervosa/Niquekaaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

kmj2016


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kmj2016/History of anorexia nervosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The sentence in recent history starting with "Between...age" could be clearer maybe change some wording around. Also if you want to continue with an abbreviation throughout the article maybe insert in parentheses the abbreviation for the first time you mention anorexia nervosa. Overall for this section I think out looks great.

Recent found insights and treatment

Assuming you used a direct quote so you could add the citation or paraphrase what's in quotation marks and then cite it.

Overall great start.