User:Kmj2016/History of anorexia nervosa/Trystian13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kmj2016


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kmj2016/History of anorexia nervosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of anorexia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Under the "Recent History" heading, maybe try to introduce the topic in the beginning a little better. When you read the beginning it feels like we're jumping right into facts without some background information. Also, maybe explain what "social relations" means as the sentence just feels a little misplaced by itself. Cite the 2020 review you used in the article along with the other information used in here that isn't your own knowledge. Maybe try changing the second heading to something more simple as well like "Progress and Treatment."