User:Kmosley03/sandbox

The article, Cabin in the Sky (film) does well at staying on track and not steering away from the main topic of the article. The article makes sure to name all of the important characters and main events of the film. There are no distracting details anywhere throughout the article although the plot was a little too descriptive at times. The article does a great job at telling the entire plot of the story, not leaving out any details and not leaving out main characters of the film. There were even small details in the description of the film that helped make that section of the article easy to understand and read. The plot and summary of the film could use a little more detail towards the middle of the section when it starts to get to the heart of the story. This is when there should be more detail so that nothing is left out or looked over. Something I liked that the article included surprisingly is that the deleted songs that were going to be used in the film were included in the article. The article also gives explanations as to why these songs and musical numbers were cut to begin with and if they were used later on in other versions of the story.

Most of the references used in the article seem reliable given they were written around the time the film was made. Other sources helped to backup some information that was stated in the article. Although most of the resources that the article used were useful and accurate, there was one that gave different information than what was presented in the article. The article stated that the budget the movie was made on was $679,000 but source stated that it was $662,141. When I looked into it some more it turns out the budget was actually $662,141. This is something that should be fixed in the article as it is important to have that information correct. Other than the information about the budget being off, everything else was correctly used and cited in the article.

The article, at times, does not give details about what all went into the making of the film and budgeting and things of that matter. The two sections about the production of the film and script are some of the only things that seem to be repeating the same information. There are many things missing from the article that should be in there. Some of the things that the article fails to include are the filming locations, production companies, technical specs, cinematographer, editors, production designers, history of the film, and credits towards many of the people who helped make this film happen. In one of the references included in the article, these things are included but is not stated anywhere in the actual article itself.