User:Kmp038/Valliculture/MRH2002! Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kmp038


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmp038/Valliculture?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Valliculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD: looks good, nothing to add

CONTENT: content is relevant and has a neutral tone. There's no way for me to know if its up to date since there's no sources.

I don't see any grammar or spelling issues. I think the way you organized the article was done well.

SOURCES: need to add sources and in text citations

overall I think the article was written well and content was strong.