User:Kmp038/Valliculture/Saw041 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kmp038


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kmp038/Valliculture?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Valliculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your article is extremely good. You really don't have anything to change except adding your citations. If you want you could probably look more into the history, like where the word comes from, any cultures that relied on this process. But you definitely don't have too since you've already added so much.