User:Knucklecracker7/Attribution (psychology)/Slayage Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Knucklecracker7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Knucklecracker7/Attribution_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Attribution (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! I am a student at the University of Pittsburgh at Greensburg. I really liked the sandbox you have been working on and I think it contains a lot of useful information. If I had to name a few minor changes i would make, I would change the internal and external titles to say "Internal Attribution" and "External Attribution". This might help provide some context. I appreciate the addition referencing COVID-19 because it is a great addition in keeping the article up to date. I believe to further expand on the current existing article, you could add more context to the application section and expand on how this theory can be applied in different ways. Other than that, I thought it was well done!