User:Kobephillips/Galapagos Penguin/Emcam03 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kobephillips


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kobephillips/Galapagos_Penguin?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Galapagos penguin

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello, I really like the reference you have chosen so far as it seems to have a lot of good details on the penguins and what you might want to add to the article.