User:Komaldeeppunni/Bhai Roop Chand/SINGH KHUSHWINDER Peer Review

General info
Komaldeeppunni
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Komaldeeppunni/Bhai_Roop_Chand?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):It is not exists.

Evaluate the drafted change
The essay does a good job of presenting the life story of Bhai Roop Chand and his enduring influence on the Sikh community by virtue of his sacrifice, commitment, and founding of Bhai Rupa village. Adding more historical background or citations to support the data provided, however, could make the post seem more credible and comprehensive. Furthermore, a clear and coherent narrative would make the text easier to read and comprehend.