User:Konniehatz/Non-renewable resource/JaneYin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Janeyin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Konniehatz/Non-renewable resource
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Non-renewable resource

Evaluate the drafted changes
Clarity and Structure

The added information is clear. The new section mainly summarizes the section on coal as one of the non-renewable fossil fuels. This section will use coal as a practical example to help readers understand the topic of non-renewable energy in more detail. The content of coal is detailed, but it would be more informative if some additional elements, such as climate change, could be added. This is because fossil fuels (coal) are often associated with issues like climate change.

The new content is clearly structured and highly completed. For example, this section adds the Wikipedia link for coal and its pictures. The sentence structure is generally free of errors. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors. For instance, in the sentence “Coal is one of the earliest form of energy", the word "form" should be plural.

Finally, the new section only covers coal, which seems somewhat limited. If another non-renewable fossil fuel can be introduced, it will be richer and help readers understand the topic better.

Balanced coverage and Neutrality

The new content is neutral and does not contain any biased content. In addition, the scope of the content connects with the topic, providing only coal-related information. For example, this part briefly introduces why coal is a non-renewable resource.

Source

This section provides four valid sources for which links are available. However, including some journal articles in this section would have been more convincing.

Suggestions for improvement

All in all, the new information could add more detail to what Wikipedia currently displays. The following suggestions hope that improving this section will help.

1. The editor can briefly add something about coal at the end, such as climate change.

2. Adding a new non-renewable fossil fuel helps make the content more affluent and more detailed.

3. Check for syntax errors before publishing.