User:KoolKat1031/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Shane Dawson

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I was an avid fan of him from previous years until recently (after the controversies), even going back to check on updates within his life. I wanted to see if everything was accurately stated about the internet personality especially since I was highly engrossed with him in the previous years when he was one of the well known YouTubers on the platform. I expected to see as much details as his fans have received over the years in the article even the possibly controversial ones that were shown in the recent times.

Evaluate the article

 * The article is written poorly in certain sections with extreme sentence structure mistakes and run on sentences. With these mistakes, the content of the article can be confusing to some who may be reading about him for the first time.
 * Missing links to some YouTubers mentioned in the article.
 * Some of the information mentioned in the timeline appears to be disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the information provided — possibly due to the poor sentence structure I mentioned above.
 * Missing citations within the article.
 * The n-word is written very clearly in the article without any censors.
 * Too many direct quotes instead of writing certain parts in their own words.

In general, the article can use slight editing and rephrasing for clearer understanding for any future readers.