User:KorahPlatts2021/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
S-phase-promoting factor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I feel there is a lot more information that can be added about this topic.There is no real introduction to the topic, which makes the topic even more confusing. I believe there should be sub-categories to strengthen the understanding of the S-phase-promoting factor. Also, the information in the article is not citied and hasn't been edited since 2017.

Evaluate the article
The article is not cited, and has not been edited since 2017. No introduction to the topic. There are no sub-categories to further understand the topic. For instance, there should be a sub-category explaining what exactly the S-phase is, and the contributions of the S-phase-promoting factor. The characteristics of the S-phase-promoting factor should be acknowledged like its optimal environment. Its feedback mechanism. There is a lot about the topic that could be expanded and explained upon to strengthen the article.

Review from Partner(Josh W.)

My Partner added some depth to the topic chosen above, her additions include charts as well as work and quotes from two notable sources. An extremely thoroughly done job to help better the S-Phase-promoting factor page! The charts allow the reader to gain a more realistic grasp of its impact.