User:Korianh/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Elaine Fuchs


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is a notice on the article that it could use editing and rewriting. The awards section also needs to be cleaned up, as it has too many details and should only highlight the most notable awards. This article has also not been edited in some time and could stand to be updated with recent work. The biography section also needs to be trimmed down and reorganized. The article as a whole does not feel unbiased and needs to be neutralized.


 * Sources
 * video from journal (also found on youtube https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F7tFDPgsTZQ&ab_channel=JournalofClinicalInvestigation)
 * journal of cell science https://jcs.biologists.org/content/117/21/4877

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Barbra H Bowman


 * Article Evaluation
 * She was listed under "did you know?" on the women in science Wikiproject. Her article, while short, seems to be comprehensive, but it has not been updated in some time and could use rewriting in places. However, she is difficult to find much information on with a simple google search, so finding good sources to use to edit her article could be difficult.


 * Sources
 * http://www.texasgeneticssociety.org/awards/
 * https://scholar.google.com/citations?user=lobtKJAAAAAJ&hl=en
 * https://www.researchgate.net/scientific-contributions/Barbara-H-Bowman-38327132

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Valentina Greco


 * Article Evaluation
 * This person ALSO worked with Elaine Fuchs so I am sensing a pattern here.
 * The article is short and needs images added if possible. What is there already is well written, but there should be more added. However, she is young, so it could be difficult to find what is needed to enhance her article and improve it.


 * Sources
 * https://www.uni-muenster.de/Cells-in-Motion/newsviews/2016/12-09.html
 * https://www.ascb.org/careers/cell-biologists-work-valentina-greco-cultivating-passionate-research-team/
 * https://medicine.yale.edu/news-article/17473/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Fiona Watt


 * Article Evaluation
 * She was a postdoc with Elaine Fuchs, whose article I am also considering! I love that.
 * Her article doesn't have any notes or notices on it about needing to be rewritten, but there are a couple places where things could be trimmed or reworded. It also would be good to update it with more current research and data, as there are claims in the article she is working with COVID-19. There are several claims made that are not cited, which needs to be edited. There also are names mentioned that have wiki articles which need to be hyperlinked.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2988410/
 * https://blogs.bmj.com/bmj/2020/07/29/fiona-m-watt-covid-19-a-new-disease-has-forced-a-re-think-of-how-we-fund-medical-research/
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1934590920302101
 * External links listed on the article:
 * Academy of Medical Sciences
 * Cancer Research UK Cambridge Research Institute
 * Centre for Stem Cells and Regenerative Medicine
 * European Molecular Biology Organization (EMBO)
 * International Society of Stem Cell Research
 * Nature Reports Stem Cells Q&A with Fiona Watt
 * Stem Cells and Human Health

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Sara Branham Matthews


 * Article Evaluation
 * From the talk page: "I am editing this page for a class project under drsusan1968. Thank you. -Reganvanmetre (talk) 20:35, 27 November 2017 (UTC)" Is that you, Dr. Chapman? Found you! :)
 * There is too much of the article focused on the biography here. There could be more detail given on the research she did and what she accomplished. But that is pretty well-written as a section.
 * I found more sources than expected on her, which means that there can be things added to her article. I specifically would want to add more information about her research and career outside of her biography section.


 * Sources
 * https://www.georgiawomen.org/sara-branham-matthews
 * http://www.oxfordhistoricalsociety.org/sara-e-branham.html
 * https://history.nih.gov/display/history/Early+Women+Scientists+at+the+NIH
 * https://oculus.nlm.nih.gov/cgi/f/findaid/findaid-idx?c=nlmfindaid;idno=branham528

Option 6
Article Title

Suzanne Eaton

Article Evaluation

This is a bit of a two-in-one article because you are finding information on both her scientific work and her disappearance... which is cool. The article is short and not very comprehensive, so I could definitely add more to that. I also want for it to have more information on her research work that she accomplished during her life. Adding information on the murder would be interesting too, though, especially if there have been recent developments. Overall, the article seems unbiased, but could use editing and rewording. My main focus would be adding information about her research and life.

Sources

https://www.mpi-cbg.de/en/research-groups/current-groups/suzanne-eaton/projects/morphogen-signaling/

https://dev.biologists.org/content/146/21/dev185538

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3718982/