User:KortClifford/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Chris Clifford: (Chris Clifford)
 * I chose this article to evaluate as I think that my dad's lived a very cool life and his wikipedia page does not reflect that. I think that it will also be easier to evaluate as I know the topic a lot better then whoever originally made the article would have.

Lead


This article does not have a Lead rather it jumps immediately to telling the reader about Mr. Clifford. Since it does not have a Lead, the article explains who Mr. Clifford is as well as one of his major accomplishments in the first sentences.

Content


This article's content is relevant but does not fully tell us everything about Mr. Clifford and is also outdated.

Tone and Balance


This article did an amazing job telling the reader about Mr. Clifford while being completely neutral and just listing the points that were valid.

Sources and References


This article did a great job using information from primary sources (that worked) and having them as a way to support what they were saying. Since the article got the information straight from the source it also gave the reader an option to do more research if they wanted.

Organization


This article is well written as it is very concise and easy to read. However, the article is not broken down into sections and does not have a sense of flow.

Images and Media


The images used in the article are captioned well and do comply with Wikipedia's copyright regulations. However, there is only one image that is from 1988 which does not give the reader an idea of what Mr. Clifford currently looks like.

Checking the talk page


There is currently no conversations on this topic. This article is rated Stub-class and Low-importance. This article is apart of WikiProjects Chicago, Illinois, Ice Hockey, and Biographies / Sports and Games.

Overall impressions


Overall, this is not a great article and tells the reader very little about Mr. Clifford's hockey career and law practice. This article can be improved by further developing specific sections and telling the reader more about his accomplishments.