User:Kp11122/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Abby (The Last of Us)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is rated "B class". It is the only main character's wiki page from The Last of Us to not have a "good article" rating, so this interested me considering the controversy around this character.

Evaluate the article
To start, I began by evaluating the content of the article. I immediately caught a few things that seemed distracting to me. One of the first sentences in the introduction of the page is about how the creator of The Last of Us, Neil Druckmann, didn't want to cast Abby's voice actor at first but was impressed by her audition tape. I don't see this as being necessary in the article at all as a matter of fact, but if the editor wanted to put it anywhere, I don't believe it belongs in the introduction. The editor also mentions right after that, still in the introduction, that Abby's voice actor, Laura Bailey, gave birth to her first son during the production of the game. This whole section was distracting and not very relevant to me. Other than those aspects, the content is a little short, but well written. Another thing that is worth noting about the content and the tone is that this article is greatly unbiased. This is a very controversial character that many players absolutely hate, so I was honestly expecting some bias but didn't find any! Moving on to evaluating the sources, they all seem to be used very well. The editor used a lot of interviews from the creator of the game and the characters, and the voice actors of the characters which come from a diverse array of sources. Additionally, all of the links work and are very recent with none dating before 2020. Finally, I checked the talk page of this article and there is nothing on it, so nothing to note there!