User:Kparso11/Cultural communication/Kassidiamos Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kparso11


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 * User:Kparso11/Cultural communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was not edited. The focus of this articles edits is on the section about Non-verbal communication. The content added to this article is relevant and adds very detailed information which wasn't present in the article before. Prior to the edits, there were only 3 vague sentences related to the topic. The content added is up to date. there is no content missing from this section and there are no gaps. The entire section flows with a neutral tone. There is no bias include in this section nor are there any points that aren't represented or underrepresented. All of the content added is backed up by reliable sources and all of the links work and are current. The sources are all diverse and thorough. The content of the section is well written and organized with little to no errors. There are no images.

Overall I think this is a great addition to the section on non-verbal communication. I especially liked the example of eye contact in the West. I think in the future as people continue to add to this article examples of other places would be a good aspect to add so people can compare and contrast. Overall, this a quality section to add to the article.