User:Kpaste/Dolabrifera dolabrifera/Aaralyn02 Peer Review

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Kpaste


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

“Many species of sea hares release purple ink as a defense mechanism”

Maybe include if your species has this specific purple ink, instead of just saying your species

has ink… just adds more vivid details.

''I understand what you mean by this. I will do more research in order to be more specific.''

“It is commonly spotty green or brown, but it can also be pink or dark brown.”

Kind of the same thing on this, is your specific species found in all these colors, or it is the

overall species?

Seeing that I included the list of colors, which leads to the point that the species is most commonly spotty green or brown, but there is also some that are pink or a darker brown.

“These animals are majorly preyed on in their habitat.”

If you wanted to add more detail, try add which animals prey on it.. And maybe how those

animals get past the ink defense mechanism.

''I appreciate the suggestion. Hopefully I can find more information about these topics.''

- Overall I think this article is really good! I understood everything and learned more about

a species I never read about before. Good job!

Thank you so much for your feedback!