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Article Evaluation

Earth (1930 film)

Everything in this article is relevant to the subject, however, not a lot of depth really goes into explaining the film and the plot and how it all ties to collectivization. The article is neutral enough, but I feel like whoever has contributed to this could have expanded more on the ties to society and collectivization throughout the Soviet Union in a neutral tone just as easily. The summary of the movie is very short sided and doesn't offer a lot of information outside of very generic statements. I would've loved to have read more about the history of the film and why it was made in the first place. Nothing is necessarily distracting but I feel like the article could benefit from added information and gone into more detail. Some of the links in the references do not appear to be updated and haven't been for a while. Even then, most of the links provided also don't have a lot of information regarding the depth of the film, only giving quick summaries of the plot synopsis and keeping the tone incredibly neutral. One of the links provided took me to a spam page, so that definitely needs to get taken off of the references.