User:Kpere039/Jake Shane/Elizabethfourniotis Peer Review

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kpere039
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AKpere039%2FJake_Shane&action=edit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Kpere039/Jake Shane

The content has improved, they added a bunch more content. The strengths of the content added were the sandbox with everything they put in regarding Jake Shane. The content added can be improved by putting more information regarding his podcast instead of his personal life.