User:Kporras5/Gloria Arellanes/Andreaplascencia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kporras5


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kporras5/Gloria Arellanes


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gloria Arellanes

Evaluate the drafted changes
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My peer review has not expanded upon the lead. In its current state, the lead is just one sentence that quickly summarizes Gloria Arellanes as a political activist involved in an organization affiliated with the Chicana movement in the 1970s. I think this is sufficient, as it leaves room for the organization (the Brown Berets) to be dissected and expanded upon in later sections. The bigger issues seem to lie in the actual contents of the article. It is generally understood that she was a part of the Brown Berets and that the organization eventually dissolved, but there are very little sources to support the section. In general, there are very little sources in the article. It would help to include more scholarly articles— especially as they pertain to Gloria Arellanes. The section "Las Adelitas de Aztan," could also be expanded upon. Perhaps including more about what the organization did, how long it ran, etc. My peer clearly seems to have ideas lined up, as well as workable sources, but has not yet actually implemented these changes. All in all, the article seems underdeveloped and could use more expansion and reliability on secondary sources.