User:Krainer02/Language delay/Jaycar71 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Krainer02)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krainer02/Language_delay?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language delay

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very interesting article. I think you have some great points to add to it, I would like to see a source to back your information up. Also, it would be helpful to kind of know where in the article this would fit in, or what your ideas were. No worries, I did the same and we are all learning here. Also, just because I am picky, I think your contribution that "Other causes may be underlying" could be edited a little bit to provide more information. It might explain what you mean by underlying, or what the source means that you are getting this information from. Good work.