User:Krhagan/Quokka/Pelang5115 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Krhagan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krhagan/Quokka?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quokka

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello pretty lady,

- You've added a lot to the conservation section which really helps the article. There is already a lot of sections on this article, and this conservation section directly relates to our class and elevates the article.

-" With climate change limiting the optimal living conditions of the quokka and changing the abundance of their diet, the quokka have found their way to being vulnerable species." --> This sentence is a little awkward it could be reworded.

- You could possibly hyperlink 'fauna' and 'aridity'.

[https://animals.sandiegozoo.org/animals/quokka#:~:text=The%20quokka%20is%20listed%20as,to%2015%2C000%20mature%20individuals%20worldwide. https://animals.sandiegozoo.org/animals/quokka#:~:text=The%20quokka%20is%20listed%20as,to%2015%2C000%20mature%20individuals%20worldwide.] --> This article mentions that quokkas are listed as vulnerable on the IUCN Red list. I didn't see a citation in your last sentence about quokkas being vulnerable, but this would be important to cite.

-Overall you've done a nice job elaborating on the conservation of Quokkas, especially relating it to climate change, nice job.