User:Krisbrown21/Isabel Morgan/Caitlinmball Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Krisbrown21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Krisbrown21/Isabel Morgan
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Isabel Morgan

Lead
I believe that the lead section is short and concise, but could possibly use a little more information about the sections of the article. I think it is a great introduction, and could use that brief overview of what the readers will be looking at. I am unsure if anything has been added to the current version of the article.

Content
For the early life and education, I think that paragraph can be broadened. There is a brief sentence of the individuals parents, but jumps straight to her graduation from college and her doctoral thesis. Does she have any siblings? A job that she did in high school? Any hobbies other than her research and career path? The information is relevant and unbiased. However, I think there should be added citations for that information (where she was born, who her parents were, where she attended college, etc.).

Tone and Balance
I do not see paragraphs/sentences that are biased, non-neutral, viewpoints that are heavily over- or under-represented, or persuasive. Good job!

Sources and References
There are a few sentences that I think should have citations, but do not. All the sources/references are reliable and work properly! I cannot separate the original article from added information, but there was minimal information in the sandbox. However, the citation in the sandbox was reliable and cited. When adding more information to your sandbox, I would suggest writing sentences and paragraphs rather than bullet points, so that it is easier to distinguish, cite, and read.

Organization
I think the article is concise and easy to read, but I also think that there is a lot of room to add more information. I noticed a few grammatical errors and citation errors, but overall is a very interesting article about Isabel Morgan. I think that the article is broken down into the major article contributors, but each part could use more information!

Images and Media
There are not pictures currently in the sandbox for this article. I cannot tell if my peer added pictures to the article directly or not.